Vovovo-vo Vo-vovovo...

Where do I start? Your sense of anatomy is excellent, given the fact that a vore theme entitles you to a bit of creative liberty. She's got an incredibly big chest and a rocking hiney to boot. However, mostly clothes and next to her engorged stomach they both look modest enough to still appeal to those of us that would like 'clean' art. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I certainly appreciated it.

The concept is believable and frankly the character's reaction is appropriate. There's something to be said for immersion. Some don't care for it, but in the context of the this type of art I feel we should all lower our standards for suspension of disbelief just a bit. That being said, I also appreciated the 'realism' added. I can actually feel a bit of empathy / sympathy for Vo here. I'm curious, are you a girl? You can feel free to get back to me on that one elsewhere. I'm just curious to see into the mind that thought this dialogue up. <3

Now, I'm not here to kiss your butt. That being said, here are some things I think could be improved. The smaller bulges on the belly are good in their own right, but I feel like you could make them look a bit more like stretched skin, make the skin around these protrusions more taught looking so to speak. Perhaps vaguely shaped like body parts of some kind, or witch some sort of stretching effect at the edges. The leg on the left (Her right leg, hidden mostly behind her body) is rather far away from her body to be at that angle. It gives the image of hips as wide as the girl's stomach!~ Moving the leg closer to her other leg or tilting it's angle so that it appears to be coming from somewhere closer to the other leg would help alleviate this.

That being said, despite these flaws the art still comes off /really/ well. The shading feels right, the expression is reasonably appropriate. The pose comes off exactly as I think you intended it to. I really, really enjoyed this piece of art.

And Vo? In your nightmare I'm worth all 14 Onis. Just saying, might be a bit easier on you~ *Wink*